1670天的第五天了,当年莎士比亚有《第18号十四行诗》,小弟在2005年也写过还爱着你(Loving You)。

Loving You By William Mak Wei Lim

Should I love you when you're hating me?

Your's smile more friendly and more charming.

My words might hurt your inner vulnerable heart,

And approaching Fish at the same day!

Somewhere I should belong to,

There where you are happy with;

That you will forgive and beloved,

Adversity destroyed our relationship;

But Loving You will not change,

Sometime missing where you're absence,

Sometime couples will break if misunderstand,

Sometime should I express love when we were kids?

When you're good student while I was prefect,

When you're naive while I was incomplete,

When I should tell I Love You but failed,

When in eternal lines pray you're always in adolescence,

                                                  So long as human longon our pages,

                                                  So long lives this that shows I Love You

 哇噻,这首诗歌11年了,感觉还很有生命力,对这就是当中我特地要让它永远活着,当年我只想到那时侯的“我们”也要她永远活在青春期-When in eternal lines pray you're always in adolescence,也要世人记得我和这首诗歌

                                                  So long as human longon our pages,

                                                  So long lives this that shows I Love You 

可能我会写第二,第三或更多的诗歌

打勾勾哦。。。

还有1666天。。。。。

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